🚀The Dark Age: Arses, asses, and chairs

Hello, friends!

In the last update, I wrote about all of my projects in a state of waiting. As these things tend to do, one of them broke free a day later. My agent, having finished reading The Dark Age, had some valuable feedback.

A revision draft always feels pretty big until you manage to begin. The kind of feedback I got from my agent was a nice mix of small fixes and large. The small ones are easy: You rewrite a line here or there to make your point a little more clearly.

The large ones, though, require a bit more work. One note my agent delivered: "Miles needs to get his shit together. He ought to be doing absolutely anything he can to whip Philip into shape. The fate of humanity sort of depends on this." (Philip: The extremely depressed astronaut who left his family behind. Miles: Philip's extremely impatient mission director.)