Crock, 11/1/21

I'm going to take a break from my long-running feud with Crock to offer some helpful humor advice: in the third panel here, Crock and Poulet should be looking into a toilet. I know, I'm usually not a big proponent of toilet humor on this blog (see for instance the 395 posts I have written over the past 15 years about the comic strip Marvin) but I think it's an important tweak that would help make this punchline, which is about desert bandits breaking into fort's plumbing, easier to parse. In its current form, the strip is relying on the reader's ability to interpret Crock art and their general investment the world-building of the Crockiverse to correctly identify that well in the final panel, and I'm sorry, but I just think that's asking too much of average person, who is doing their best but quite frankly has a lot on their mind right now.

Gasoline Alley, 11/1/21