Hi-Q: celestial stone
celestial stone
between the tides
of wired lightning
Here's a look at how this haiku evolved:
it started with the line
between the wires
the next line/image was
space boulder
inspired by the Chuck Johnson album title Blood Moon Boulder, it was playing at the time
it then became
celestial boulder
and then changed once more, to
celestial stone
put together
celestial stone
between the wires
this grew to
celestial stone
between the wires
tides of communication
which became
celestial stone
between the wires
ebb and flow of communication
which changed again to
celestial stone between
the wires ebb and flow
of communication
which continued to change, this time to
celestial stone
between the wires ebb and
flow of communication
of course then I remembered that those lines are power lines so I felt it necessary to tweak things
the tides reference was pulling me back
but what image/word to use for electricity? power. ions. etc
celestial stone
between the tides
of wired lightning